My dream.
Today Ray Bishop visited our school. his dream was to be and professional singer. how he became a singer he had Role Models the Role Models was his family he watch his family sing and play the guitar he learned off them.and what i want to achieve i want to be and Rugby player how i can achieve that go to training all the time and give it your all and try my best.
Hi Sonny this is Keila. I like your story you wrote I thought that you used lots of detail in your story and I thought that you had a fantastic introduction. Just one thing you need to know is that all your writing is in capital letters so just remember not to use all capital letters OK. But anyway great job Sonny keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Sonny this is Keila. I like your story you wrote I thought that you used lots of detail in your story and I thought that you had a fantastic introduction. Just one thing you need to know is that all your writing is in capital letters so just remember not to use all capital letters OK. But anyway great job Sonny keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi sonny my name is Mathew from ohaeawai primary school i like that duffy book
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