A day at the I phone factory.

In class I had to write a reount from the perspective (view) of a child working in a sweatshop.I chose to be kid working in a I phone factory.

WALT use descriptive words and phrases to enhance the mood of fear or sadness

I think I'm successful about the emotive words I put in this story like, inside me a tornado was storming .It was a great idea writing about the I phone factory.

A day at the I phone factory.

On A Tuesday morning,I was trying to get out of bed!,and I said Just give me a couple of  minutes!. So I jumped out of the bed as fast as a rabbit. So I didn’t what to be late for work.Me and some other kids and my friends (Bohai) was getting ready to.

The Boss said I had to work another 8 hours!.For being 2 minutes late.I was looking at the ground have an hissyfit inside me a tornado was storming.I said.. yes boss.I said I never what to feel like this again.I worked at the I phone factory.we started at 8:00 am.Our normal time is 9 hours.me and (Bohai) was gluing the phone together.

We earn 1 Yuan per 3 hours.The buzzer went off for lunch When I walk outside to have some fresh air there I was getting dizzy I was trying to get of my chair.

My friend (Bohai) helped me to get outside before the buzzer went off for work. Me and him quickly got a bowl of rice and eating It like a pig eating scraps.

        

The buzzer went off for work I said in the inside me I can’t wait until this day was over.I said oh no I spoken to soon I had another 14 hours to goooo! I said.I was screwing the phones screw screw,I had a couple more hours to go I was still glueing the phones together for ever.

Finally the manager said 10 minutes to go works,I felt like I was going to Die in there and never come out from there alive.I was trying to glue then fast for my last job.They said get into a line so they can have our uniforms when we go back to our slave houses.