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Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Plastic Fantastic

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
WALT use language features of persuasive writing

To be successful I will:
Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

I think I need more lessons. I am still working on using emotive language and I am still learning to proof-read my own work.


Plastic Bags


I believe that plastic bags are bad for the environment.do you agree or disagree? Well i agree.

My first reason why the plastic bag are bag to animal.say if you drop one then and animal will try to eat it then try to swoll and it will choke on it then die. Think of all the animal just died for and few plastic bags that will just be harmful for our animal.

My second reason why it is bad for the in environment because.you can get in and car crash by getting and plastic bag in the front of your window screen,at least half of the litter blown from landfill is some kind of plastic, mostly bags. and it is bad for the ocean to like if you drop it then fish will eat it then choke on it or they  will suffocate if it goes on it head that will be  ,and imagine all of the fish all die from plastic bags,We don’t what this killing all our fish? that will be just  dreadful.

My third reason why plastic bag they’re pretty much everywhere.because it flies all over the place,some people are getting disappointing of how much plastic bags are in on your fence people just hate it. er

In summary why i think plastic bag are bad for the environment. It is bad for animal life,and sometimes it is   handy with something.

1 comment:

  1. Hello I am Benson from Waikowhai Primary School in Room 9! I agree with you that plastic bags are bad for the environment!I loved your writing about plastic bags and it was interesting!Ka pai! We're doing recycling of soft plastic's at our school which is a new programme. Don't forget to check out my blog at http://wpsbensoni.blogspot.co.nz/.

    Blog you later and keep up the good work!

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