this is my persuasive writing term 3.

I am learning to connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings. To be successful I will start sentences like this For example, Added to this, If … then In others words Plus
By Sonny

I think We should bring big wheels little wheels to school. Do you agree? Yes or yes? The first reason why I think that big wheels little wheels should come back to school is because it bring joy to the students. For example,when you see kids on skateboards, scooter or bikes they always have a smile on their face.Would you want to be bored because the park some time is boring.We want to have smiles on our face not a frown because we are so bored. The other reason why I think we should have bikes at school it show it teach is use kaha because it is fun and when you fall off you get back on and try again.It is hard and nervracking the first time you ride a scooter,skateborde or bike. When you go down the ramp feels like you are going down the fearfall. You will have the time of your life when the first time you open scooter,bike or skateboards you can do tricks In summary, I think we should be able to bring bikes to school.… And i think this because bikes are fun and they teach us to be tumaia. My next learning steps are: To use the correct structure for persuasive writing by myself Learn and use emotive language to help people agree with me Use connective to connect my supportive detail.