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Tuesday, 15 March 2016

shame on me I need to used some punc and some vocab in my writing

shame on me draft one

I don’t why I am going to tell you this, but I will. It all started one day when I went to school, you see something embarrassing happened that day.


one morning me and Tim were talking on the bus then when we arrived at school .we had and play for and while  then the bell ring when I went to sit down on the mat. just then I Felt a rip . I thought it might be from the Ground making sounds. a  few minutes later it was time for play when i look at the back of my pants they was a hole! at the back of my pants i was trying to hide it away i trying to pull my t shirt down I wished I be sick so I can go home. What if someone sees me. I said I wanted to so my pants.

when i was walking along the Court my T shirt was going back up when Myra was looking at my hole at the back of my pants It was soooo! Embarrassing when she look she was laughing
Then I ran to the toilet I felt so ashamed for bringing these shorts to school the next day.

When Myra was looking that day i felt like that was the dumst day ever

5 comments:

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  2. HI SONNY THAT STORY WAS A VERY FUNNY STORY YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF
    THINKING A FUNNY STORY BLOG YOU LATER.

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  3. Sup Sonny.like your story. the most piece i like is when u said Myra was looking at your hole.

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  4. HAHA Sonny your story cracked me up and the part I really liked was when Myra saw that you had a hole in your pants and why I liked it because it's really funny and interesting and such a great story Sonny.

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  5. Hello Sonny you had a really funny story about Myra looking at your hole on your pants that was a crack up it was one of the funniest story in my life. Blog you later.

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